He was the son her father always wanted…
Major Quinn Camden is a man of honor. But working with
Clairy McKinnon on her father's memorial tests every chivalrous code! Clairy is
feisty, beautiful -- and still hurt that General McKinnon mentored Quinn over
his own adoring daughter. When their years-long rivalry is replaced by
undeniable attraction, Quinn wonders if the general's dying wish is the magic
they both need…or if the man's secrets will tear them apart for good.
Fantastic enemies-to-lovers story. After her mother's
death when she was eight, Clairy's Marine father packed her off to his parents
to raise, leaving him free to pursue his career. On his rare visits home, he
paid very little attention to Clairy. Those attentions disappeared altogether
when ten-year-old Quinn showed up, asking for the general's help preparing to
become a Marine himself. Over the next eight years, Clairy found herself shoved
aside time and again.
Quinn was raised to pursue any goal in a no-holds-barred
fashion, so he saw nothing wrong with asking for the general's help. However, with
the typical selfishness of a teenage boy, he never saw the effect it had on his
idol's daughter.
The book opens shortly after General McKinnon's death. In
his will, he left instructions and money for a memorial and foundation showcasing
his career and those of other town military members. The foundation will help
veterans, and is to be run by Clairy. Quinn is tagged to set up the actual
display of the general's life and career. This means that Clairy and Quinn must
find a way to work together. Furious, Clairy wants nothing to do with Quinn but
can't find a way out of it. All she can think of is the way he treated her,
even though she hasn't seen him in fifteen years.
Quinn knows he has a challenging task ahead of him. He
recently learned some things about the general that shook him to the core and
caused him to take a hard look at himself and his attitudes. Can he overcome
the effects of his mentor's training, or is he destined to follow in his
footsteps?
The first couple of meetings between Quinn and Clairy are
painful. The hurt and anger Clairy feels run deep, and with her father's death,
any hope of changing their relationship is gone. She still holds Quinn
responsible for keeping her father from her, and she makes no secret of her
feelings toward him. Quinn attempts to apologize, but Clairy is skeptical of
his sincerity. I liked that Quinn didn't give up and did his best to
demonstrate by his actions that he'd changed. In a very emotional scene, Clairy
explains to Quinn what life with her father was like, countered by the same
events from Quinn's point of view. It was an eye-opening conversation for both of
them and the first steps in healing the rift between them. As the general's
secrets come out, we see the effect on Quinn as he learns about them and again
as he shares them with Clairy. Her reaction surprised him, and I loved how she
helped him deal with the guilt he felt.
As that rift narrowed and then disappeared, the attraction
that each felt began to simmer and grow. The question became one of what to do
about it? Clairy, recently divorced from a man who turned out to be much like
her father, wants no part of a relationship with a man whose life revolves
around his work. At the same time, Quinn's look at his past relationships
leaves him wondering if he's capable of a normal relationship with any woman,
much less Clairy. I loved watching Quinn's journey as he looked at himself, the
changes he needed to make, and the effect that Clairy had on how he saw
himself. I loved the ending as he bared his heart to her, and Clairy had to
decide if she could trust him and herself enough to have a lifetime together.
My only complaint about the book has nothing to do with
the story itself. Yet again, Harlequin and its editors have shown themselves
unable or unwilling to capitalize the word Marine in their books properly. When
writing of a member of the United States Marine Corps, the word Marine is ALWAYS
capitalized. Lower case "marine" refers to something related to water
or the sea, such as marine mammals or marine life.
See: P 151, The
Associated Press Stylebook, 2004
Marines:
Capitalize when referring to U.S. forces: the U.S. Marines, the Marines, the Marine
Corps, Marine regulations. Do not use
the abbreviation USMC.
Capitalize Marine when referring to an individual in a
Marine Corps unit: He is a Marine.
Do not describe Marines as soldiers, which is generally
associated with the Army. Use troops if
a generic term is needed.